Monday, July 20, 2009

Yet another poetry challenge...

Believe it or not, it took me a whole week of thinking to come up with this kind of lame attempt at an "abcedarian". i kind of like it - in a way... i wrote it in probably less than 2 minutes - but i tend to like simple... It was inspired by my sweet Sloanie.

Achingly
Beautiful
Child,
Dances
Effortlessly-
Flawlessly-
Gracefully.
Happiness and
Innocence
Joined.
Kindness and
Laughter
Mixed in
Neverland.
One Child.
Passionate,
Questioning,
Rescuing
Saints and
Teachers
Until
Vicariously, with
Wings like a
Xenops
Youth's
Zealousness - makes us fly.

6 comments:

jessica jespersen said...

so good paige!-j

paige said...

i made Neil read it & he stared at the screen for about 2 minutes & then said, "i don't get it." HAHA! i'm glad you like it :)

Erik said...

Hey Paige, I never heard a response to my last comment to your last poetry challenge. What are your thoughts? Could poetry challenge be a MTC ministry?

I hope you don't mind me asking. I just think it is an awesome expressionism for us at MTC to encounter Jesus!

paige said...

ha, Erik -
i have no idea what that could/ would look like... i'm such a wannabe that i'd be a little intimidated to start something like that...
i will think about it as i continue to learn :)

Sherilyn said...

That was beautiful!

Sherilyn said...

That was beautiful!

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