Believe it or not, it took me a whole week of thinking to come up with this kind of lame attempt at an "abcedarian". i kind of like it - in a way... i wrote it in probably less than 2 minutes - but i tend to like simple... It was inspired by my sweet Sloanie.
Achingly
Beautiful
Child,
Dances
Effortlessly-
Flawlessly-
Gracefully.
Happiness and
Innocence
Joined.
Kindness and
Laughter
Mixed in
Neverland.
One Child.
Passionate,
Questioning,
Rescuing
Saints and
Teachers
Until
Vicariously, with
Wings like a
Xenops
Youth's
Zealousness - makes us fly.
so good paige!-j
ReplyDeletei made Neil read it & he stared at the screen for about 2 minutes & then said, "i don't get it." HAHA! i'm glad you like it :)
ReplyDeleteHey Paige, I never heard a response to my last comment to your last poetry challenge. What are your thoughts? Could poetry challenge be a MTC ministry?
ReplyDeleteI hope you don't mind me asking. I just think it is an awesome expressionism for us at MTC to encounter Jesus!
ha, Erik -
ReplyDeletei have no idea what that could/ would look like... i'm such a wannabe that i'd be a little intimidated to start something like that...
i will think about it as i continue to learn :)
That was beautiful!
ReplyDeleteThat was beautiful!
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